114: REACTION

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The next morning, we assemble around the picnic table, and Lina explains what she and the Friend have spent the past day investigating. “So. We have a hypothesis that may actually answer quite a lot of questions.”

“Great,” Tinera says. “I love things that answer questions.”

“So. As you all know, we’ve been somewhat mystified by the DIVRs’ most recent synnerve scans. The captain and the friend’s don’t show up at all, which would suggest some sort of intolerance of the tracer, except that their initial scans worked fine, and Aspen’s latest scans were mysteriously blank only in specific areas. As Aspen pointed out yesterday, these blank areas correspond roughly with the parts of their body that have been subjected to the ship’s electrostatic shield. And the captain and Friend, of course, like the rest of the convict crew, have been immersed entirely in the shield.”

“DIVR and shield immersion?” Captain Klees asks. “That’s the formula?”

“It seems so, yes.”

“How does that work? Biologically?”

“Well. This is just conjecture. But the electrostatic field does kill artificial nerves.”

“Hold up,” Tinera cuts in. “I thought you said all our synnerves died when we disconnected the cerebral stimulators years ago.”

The Friend shakes its head. “No, the synnerves are inactive without the stimulator. Dead tissue is different.”

Lina nods. “The tracers can clearly still attach to dead synnerves in a living body, as demonstrated by the synnerve scans of the rest of us. But our current theory is that DIVRs break down the dead synnerves, and other people don’t. I’ve been looking over our old data; you might recall that awhile ago, we noted that the synnerve growth in the brains on this ship was every aggressive. I noted at the time that the growth in DIVR brains seemed to be slightly less, but this could easily have been a coincidence. It was still far in excess of what it should be, and the difference wasn’t large, and our sample size was too small to draw any conclusions.” Her hands flutter in agitation. “What I failed to consider at the time is that sheer mass may not be the only factor. The placement of a synnerve going into a brain is also pretty important, and there’s a slight random element to their growth. Our current theory is that if these synnerves, which you may recall are designed to be able to send and receive a fair bit of information and interface with the brain more than the standard kind, grow into a life-critical area, they should shut down and die off to protect the colonist; we think that this probably operated normally. But the sheer amount of such nerves, even if dead, are a risk all of their own when the growth is so aggressive. If DIVRs can physically break these down and others can’t, that probably explains the DIVR resilience to the revival viability drop. That’s our working theory, anyway.”

“This also probably explains this Friend’s mysterious hospitalisation period,” the Friend says. “Captain, you were taking neurostims at the time, which would have suppressed the more obvious symptoms, but was there a period of time around then that you felt unusually stiff and sore, probably with a shortened attention span, increased irritation, or muscular shaking or cramping?”

Captain Klees shrugs. “Probably? Heli and then the murder investigation happened around that time, so I had a lot of increased irritation regardless.”

“Aspen, did you experience any extreme stiffness, soreness, or mild swelling in the affected limbs around that time?”

I frown. “I don’t think so? I mean, I don’t take note of every time I wake up with a muscle cramp. Maybe? Why; what exactly do we think is going on here? How does being a DIVR affect synnerves like this?”

The doctors exchange another glance.

“We’re not protein scientists,” Lina says, “and we don’t have documentation on the structure of these synnerves, obviously. But we had another look at the ones we have in storage, and we think – and this isn’t our field, mind – we think that we might know what’s going on. The outer layer of the synnerves is a semibiological protective coating, which we believe starts to slowly degrade once the nerve is dead. Eventually, this will start exposing the second layer. Which, in most of us, doesn’t matter; the material is inert, the body ignores it. Unless said body is inclined to destroy it.”

I start to get the feeling that I can see where this is going, and I don’t like it. “I see. And what is that now-exposed layer made from?”

“Quite a lot of things, most of which we couldn’t analyse or properly identify. But one of the proteins we did identify… is extremely similar in structure to a particular protein in citrus fruits.”

“Ah. I see.” I stand up. “Excuse me, I need to walk into the ocean forever.”

“You’re on the Courageous, not in Arborea,” Captain Klees says. “We don’t have an ocean.”

I sit down again. “Well, when we get to Hylara, the first thing we need to do is find an ocean. And if it doesn’t have one, I’ll fucking make one. For the sole purpose of walking into it forever. Because if I’m following all of this correctly – and tell me if I’m wrong – what you’re saying is that our unusually high chances of surviving this chronostasis has nothing to do with our physical resilience, or increased ability to handle pressure or temperature or blood chemistry fluctuations, or our ability to survive for a decent length of time on zero oxygen. None of the things that you’d expect to help with a long term coma. You’re telling me that the reason we’re so good at surviving this is because we also happen to be allergic to citrus.”

“Yeah,” Lina says. “Yeah, that’s pretty much it.”

“Hmm. Captain, you must find me an ocean to walk into on Hylara.”

“I’ll put it on our initial survey schedule,” he sighs.

My life very probably saved because I can’t eat oranges. What the fuck.

“At least this answers many questions,” Denish says. “About health and chronostasis and soforth. Every day, we have less mysteries!”

“Every day, we have different mysteries,” Tinera corrects him. “I’m sure something new and weird will happen soon. We still don’t know if any of Captain Kae Jin’s surviving crew were involved in this whole synnerve computer brain thing.”

“Or involved in the engine and atmosphere sabotage thing,” Sam says.

“Or whether the signal sent from the Hylara probe was intended to sabotage the engines and atmosphere, or tell the ship not to sabotage the engines and atmosphere,” I add.

“Or whether this ozone layer is real, and if so, what the life on Hylara is like,” Lina says.

“Or whether Dor Delphin is a prospective space king, or a mad scientist in charge of one of the projects, or just a random colonist with unfortunate family connections,” the Friend says.

“I bet Captain Kae Jin’s people are all in on the mad science,” Tinera grumbles. “That’d just be the perfect cap on everything.”

“They very well might be,” Lina says, “looking at their decision to stay awake past age forty. They either made a great sacrifice doing that, or they knew that something was up with the synnerves.”

Denish shakes his head. “No. They are not involved. Rynn-Hatson and at least one other person was, to tell the computer which brains it could take. But most of them are not.”

“How do you figure?” Tinera asks.

“Tal, when was the aft engine broken again?”

“Day 789.”

“I meant in – ”

“Right! Um, about two years and two months into the journey.”

“And when did captain Kinoshita first notice viability drop in the colonists?”

“Um.” Tal gets up and heads to the medbay without explanation. We wait patiently for a few minutes. Ke comes back. “She first mentions it on Day 9696. That’s about twenty six and a half years into the journey.”

Denish nods. “If sabotage was an accident, it occurred when the crew thought they had about eighteen years left of this ship, and turned it into about thirty eight years. What if they intended to start the project soon after that engine damage, and the engine damage threw everything off schedule? It is an experiment on sleeping people with many, many synnerves being grown in their brains. It was going to have problems eventually, like affecting viability. Richard Rynn-Hatson died engineering the chronostasis pods very soon before his crew went into chronostasis – they wanted to start the project as late as they possibly could. Because of the new extended timeline. What if they were supposed to start earlier, to monitor most of it themselves and leave Kinoshita’s team to supervise the tail-end of it, but the extended timeline meant they had to leave all of it in Kinoshita’s hands? That is the only reason I can see for this. If he was going to do it so late, it would have been done at the start of the second shift instead, not the very end of the first; the first crew could be left out entirely. Instead, it was meant to start much earlier. Perhaps be a fifteen or eighteen year long project. But the longer trip forced him to wait as long as possible before starting it.”

“That makes sense,” Tinera says, “but I don’t see what it has to do with the rest of Captain Kae Jin’s crew being innocent.”

“Oh! Because,” Lina says, “they took half of the trip and left the other half to Reimann’s crew. If Kae Jin, or the majority of her crew, were in on the experiment, they could have chosen to stay awake for thirty years and give the planned ten to Reimann’s crew. Then they could’ve don’t their experiment on the planned schedule, just starting twenty years later. The fact that they split the journey in half instead suggests that the conspirators couldn’t control the schedule.”

I run the math. “If I understand the timeline correctly, their original timeline couldn’t possibly have helped anyway. Viability started to drop off six and a half years into the project, right? And with Richard Rynn-Hatson on the first crew initiating it, it must have been planned to run for longer than ten years.”

“Is possible that they did not care about colonist viability,” Denish shrugs. “Perhaps there was something else that would go wrong in time. Or perhaps their predictions were wrong; we all think that this is probably a novel experiment, yes? They could not know all the effects in advance.”

I nod. From Kinoshita’s notes, they didn’t seem to know very much in advance at all.

“Well, I’m sure we’ll learn all the fun details when we start waking up conspirators, if there’s any conspirators alive to tell it,” Tinera shrugs. “And if not, who fucking cares?”

“I want to know what went on, and why,” Lina says. “If we include the viability drop, we’re losing over half the colony to this stupid project.”

“Sunk cost, doctor,” Tinera shrugs. “Doesn’t affect its relevance now. Maybe the answer will be in your research on the tissues from the dead colonists. And I’m sure you’ll have plenty more braindead test subjects to study on life support when we start reviving colonists.”

“By that point, I daresay the long-term effects of these synnerves will be a more relevant area of study. Normal synnerves are harmless once the cerebral stimulator is removed. But I don’t trust these ones. I’m terrified that all of us except for Captain Klees and the Friend are going to wake up with some horrible nerve disorder one morning.”

“Speaking of,” Denish says, “we could turn the electrostatic shield back on temporarily. If Aspen wanted to…”

“No,” I say. “The synnerves aren’t doing anything, so far as we can tell, and they’re not supposed to. I’m not going to dangle out of a spaceship to inflict an immune response on myself that nearly killed the Friend, just to get rid of something that’s not doing anything.”

“Knowing what to expect, we could treat your symptoms immediately,” Lina says. “You wouldn’t be in the danger that the Friend was in.”

“It still doesn’t sound like a particularly fun time. If you find any long-term problems, I’ll reconsider. But as it stands, I think killing off the nerves is more likely to have long-term problems than just leaving them. Strong immune responses can create long-term problems.”

Lina nods. “Very well.”

I don’t want to go through a medical crisis right now. We have crises enough.

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22 thoughts on “114: REACTION

  1. “Ah. I see.” I stand up. “Excuse me, I need to walk into the ocean forever.”

    Aspen is a Drama Regent. Being saved by not being able to eat oranges is in no way dramatic enough for this reaction.

    I’m not sure not going through the shield again was the right choice here. I would’ve gone, the idea of dormant nerves that’ll never go away creeps me out.

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    1. They had accepted that they’d have some synnerves in them forever anyway though, cause that’s how the cronostasis works, they just have more of them than they should. So Aspen may be fine with the synnerves that are left because they had already accepted some synnerves.

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  2. Okay, so if the DIVRs reacted differently to the nerves because they’re allergic to citrus… then what the hell did Claire and Mohammed kill themselves doing? They were trying to “solve the DIVR mystery” but where and why did highly dangerous chemicals come into play? What were they making or even trying to do?

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    1. Highly dangerous chemicals that made Kinoshita resort to ejecting a lab ring makes me think it’s so nasty it can’t be properly decontaminated. Methyl mercury perhaps? Horrifying stuff, goes right through latex gloves and similar ppe and a drop is enough to poison you. Nervous system damage right out of everyone’s worst nightmares. Something along those lines.

      Unfun fact: tons and tons of the stuff were dumped into the oceans. It’s why you shouldn’t eat too much saltwater fish, especially species at the end of the food chain.

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      1. But why synthesize that? What could that hope to accomplish? Assuming they were trying to get the DIVRs to be just as susceptible to being taken by the AI as everyone else, giving the DIVRs Immunosuppressants would make sense, but what kind of immunosuppressants would kill 3 people from exposure like that? Would kill Ash who wasn’t even in the lab ring for very long?

        The AI claimed all the way near the beginning to know what exactly they were making, but Aspen didn’t want to know. I don’t want anyone to try repeating their experiment, but I am curious if the crew could piece together what it was supposed to accomplish.

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  3. Good point. There are still too many open questions. Im very curious to see, who was involved in the experiment and who wasn’t. I’m very glad we know the reason why the friend was so sick. I didn’t want anything happen to it. It is one of my favorite characters!
    Also I hope there is an ocean for Aspen at the new planet, but not for them to walk in, just to Aspen can feel more at home again.

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  4. oho, i remember what aspen doesn’t, i just thought it was unrelated foul play.

    also, i have a theory about dor. i definitely don’t think he was there to play space king- though he may have thought that was the case. someone put him there for him to die. while he wasn’t in CRs 1 or 5, he was still put on the ship that had the bizarre wetware plan in place. furthermore, he was put on the same ship as aspen freakin’ greaves. antarctica (or someone else) wanted him gone for some reason.

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    1. Ooh, interesting speculation!
      However, it wouldn’t make a difference for any Earth adversaries of Dor’s if he’s (thunder effect) SPACE KING or dead, would it? He wouldn’t wake up from cryosleep before they’re dead anyway, even if the ship had made the originally planned journey. He would be gone for good anyway, even if he was set up to be King Shit of not-yet inhabitable Hylara.

      Also, I need to check what Aspen doesn’t remember. Is it unexplained cramping in their arms after the climb up and down the ship’s shielding without any doctor to check on them?

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      1. I mean, then again, everyone on the 2nd crew was surprised by the viability drop. Maybe no one on the ship realized that being part of the hivemind was a death sentence, but it’s possible the conspirators still on Earth knew and just… didn’t think to mention it.

        So yeah maybe CR3 was supposed to be sabotaged and Dor was never informed that hivemind=death, or it just didn’t compute to him that that would be the case.

        Maybe he wanted to be taken thinking his mind would overpower the rest and he would become an immortal God living through the AI long after his body died. (And the AI would be worshipped and people would ritually sacrifice people to the AI to keep their God (him) alive.)

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    2. CR1 and CR5 were at the front and back of the ship, likely to ensure that if one half of the ship is damaged, the AI will still have half its brains. If any more were to be sabotaged, it would be rings 2 and 4 or just 3. Considering that Sands was in 3, and the placing your spy in the safest ring would be important, I think 3 was supposed to remain untouched. If the conspiracy wanted him dead, they could probably control which ring he was put into and put him in the first sabotaged ring.

      Or just fuck up the port install.

      I also don’t think Dor would consider Aspen Greaves to be a threat to his space king colony. After all, Aspen was in CR5 and so should’ve been made part of the hive mind. I think it’s very clear where the people the conspirators wanted dead were put.

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  5. Other thought: Now that they can be reasonably confident that the 1st crew isn’t full of conspirators (even if that doesn’t rule out there being no conspirators), they should really work on their script for what they’re going to say to the 1st crew when they wake up. After all, they’re going to have a lot of questions like:
    “Who are you?”
    “Where are the people who were on the 2nd crew?”
    “What happened to the 2nd crew?”
    “What happened to the AI? Why doesn’t the ship have one?”
    “What happened to 2 of the chronostasis rings?”
    “What do you mean they’re all dead?”
    “What secret project?”
    “What do you mean there’s ozone on the planet?”

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    1. Additionally, there’s 0% chance of being able to wait to explain things because there was at least one conspirator who told the AI which rings they took take brains from, and if they’re not stupid they’re not the crew members who were in CR1 or CR5. They’ll have to interrogate the 1st crew to determine who it was.

      I’m reminded of the TED-Ed werewolf bonus riddle. You go to a town where you know there’s at least one werewolf, and in the town all the humans tell the truth and the werewolves tell lies. You interview every person and they all say “at least one of us is human.”
      The obvious conclusion is that everyone in that town is a werewolf. I’m getting the uneasy feeling that the crew are going to be faced with a similar situation.

      After all, there are any number of reasons the 1st crew didn’t take a 30 year shift. Maybe they just didn’t want to. Maybe the fact the synerves worked for >40 year olds didn’t translate to working for >50 year olds. (And they did know about that! That’s suspicious! Did the conspirators tell them? Why would the non-conspirators tell the conspirators “actually these are special synerves that work for old people!”) Maybe the majority of the project was supposed to be monitored by the 2nd crew, so your observations aren’t split between 2 teams. Maybe Richard just got impatient. Maybe the engine sabotage was the plan all along, and the sabotage was to prevent any non-conspirators from trying to ensure the trip took the amount of years it was supposed to.

      There is at least one conspirator, and we can only speculate the logic behind any of the 1st crew’s decisions. The conspirators had enough sway that the rotation wasn’t split with the 1st crew doing 10 and the 2nd doing 30. That suggests they were aware the synerves were different as well as suggest that no one on the 2nd crew could sabotage the CR rings for the AI. Or that again, the 2nd crew should’ve done all the sabotage but Richard got impatient and wanted to do his part.

      I wonder if the conspirators have a script to explain what the fuck is wrong with the AI. Maybe while the 1st crew is recovering in the medbay they could try to manipulate the conspirators into divulging their script about this exciting leap forward in AI development before hitting them with “the AI is dead.”

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  6. I think I see a mystery that the crew hasn’t mentioned. The numbers don’t line up on how the second crew split and who died. Way back in the first few chapters.

    The AI said there were five confirmed deaths and names them — three people who died related to the experiment that resulted in ejecting the lab ring, Captain Kinoshito, and Captain Reimann. A little later, the AI said there were five bodies in the freezer. At the time, Aspen probably assumed the fifth was Reimann’s even though he only saw three bodies in addition to the remains he was adding. But later, we find Reimann’s body was still in CR 1. So…that’s five confirmed deaths and six bodies, one of which is unidentified.

    Moreover, there was some complex word problem stuff going on with the crew left in the front of the ship, but it came out to 14 paintings and one body — 15 dead. One less than expected if 5 out of the crew of 21 ended up in the back part of the ship.

    I’ve come up with some possible explanations, none of which seem overwhelmingly likely. Probably the most likely is that Amy hid knowledge about one of the crew, or someone else managed to force her to hide knowledge about one of the crew. But why? Other thoughts: the fifth body in the freezer is somehow not actually dead? The body in CR 1 wasn’t actually Reimann, or for some reason the ship was identifying both the body in CR 1 and another crew member as Reimann? (Maybe the untranslated shorthand in Kinoshita’s notes meant Reimann’s identical twin or clone was in stasis, and somehow Reimann woke them up and without Reimann’s ID chip the AI thought they were the same person? That doesn’t explain what happened to the 21st crew member though.)

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    1. The body in CR1 was definitely Reimann. It was missing an arm, an arm found in the coolant that had his ID chip or else Tal wouldn’t have been able to get it.

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    2. It’s… probably just a math fail. I’ve seen other instances of writers making these mistakes. I can see that happening whether or not Derin is a math person, given that I’m a math person and I can see myself making those kind of mistakes. In conclusion, it’s probably a case of writer error rather than more weird mystery nonsense.

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  7. Aspen DID have a reaction- it was that day he woke up and his arm was numb, and yet he decided to treat it like it was some run-of-the-mill random numbness!

    GOD THIS STORY US GONNA DRIVE ME INSANE!!

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  8. “I mean, I don’t take note of every time I wake up with a muscle cramp.”

    Aspen should when it lasts for days

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